Overall, I think it is easy to find information. The layout is good, professional, clean. I don't like the large ads, though. I get turned off by conspicuous ads on a home page, but maybe that's just me.
I took a look at this page: http://youthfulinvestor.com/doman-names-investments/ and this page:http://youthfulinvestor.com/investing-in-canadian-banks/
I noticed some issues with the writing, most notably the excessive and seemingly random use of bold and exclamation marks. There are some issues with repeated information, phrase structure, comma usage, spacing, and general flow as well. It does not like a professional voice. I think the content is awesome - imagine the edge you'd get as a job seeker, or the stability from a Canadian bank. Wow. But it's hard to read.
Thanks Matt. Those are some of my earlier articles and I have improved. But you are definitely write sometimes I have not put in the best effort as far as rereading and proofreading the content. This is something I have vowed to change because I write such long and extensive content I am making that change.
You're welcome! BTW, I sent you an email to the admin@ address you have listed.
- Target audience is twenty somethings and college students
- Trying update during the week a few times
- Is it easy to navigate and figure out?
- Is it an eye sore or easy on the eyes?
- Is everything easily relevant?
- Do you like the formating of the posts?
Opinions, suggestions, criticisms, etc. are greatly appreciated. Thanks.