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3 Replies Last post: Jun 6, 2008 6:42 PM by websolutions

Review Requested of Content on website page, please

Apr 21, 2008 10:59 PM

LRSVV3 11 posts since
Apr 7, 2008

Hey everyone!

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated on the content, or functionality of this website page. Thanks!

http://www.preloadedstores.com/special_of
fer/

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Gnd.Designs 5 posts since
Apr 18, 2008

1. Re: Review Requested of Content on website page, please Apr 22, 2008 12:45 PM

I just viewed your store. In general it has a good overall look to it. (Green is associated with money!)

Your "special offer" page that you gave the link to is a bit crowded, though. It needs to get to the point of what the offer is and then stick to it. The tutorial should be on its own page, that would help simplify the page.

I only took a few minutes to look at it, as this is all a customer will give you before they click away. Perhaps you could make the suggested changes and post again?

Good Luck
Susan

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Bridge 390 posts since
Jun 3, 2008

2. Re: Review Requested of Content on website page, please Jun 6, 2008 6:19 PM

Suggesstions:

1) Move menu box frm right to left sie of the screen - people are use to seeing it on the left
2) Too much informtation on the home page - have to scroll down too far to read it all

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websolutions 191 posts since
Feb 4, 2008

3. Re: Review Requested of Content on website page, please Jun 6, 2008 6:42 PM

in response to: Bridge

I agree with you, the pages are not stratigically used.

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