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20 Replies Last post: Jan 9, 2008 10:03 AM by Emile Yarder

What's the trick to a good business slogan?

Sep 21, 2007 12:34 PM

Click to view ScubaDive's profile Founders ScubaDive 36 posts since
Jul 22, 2007

Hello,


I am in the process of coming up with ideas for my business and I am both trying to find a catchy name and a catchy business slogan for my outdoor adventure/scuba dive company in Maui. Question: What's the trick to a good business slogan?


Should it be short and sweet? Or longer and more descriptive? I was thinking that I wanted to include in the name Maui and also something about adventure, but I also wanted to make it interesting and not something too standard.


I am not sure the best way to go about the process. Does one brainstorm, write down every word possible and start combining them? If you've found a great business slogan or have any advice, I'd certainly appreciate it. Thanks!

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Click to view LUCKIEST's profile SCORE LUCKIEST 5,733 posts since
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1. Re: What's the trick to a good business slogan? Sep 21, 2007 1:20 PM
That is the $64,000. question. Since you are from Maui and use the
user name of "ScubaDive" you sound like you are on the right track.
In picking both a name and a business slogan consider the following.
The name should hi light the product / service offered. It should also identify the
customer demand for your product / service.
The name or slogan should also explain how your product / service will be
advertised and marketed.
Finally, I would check the yellow pages (remember the old phone books)
to see what your competition is using.
Good luck, LUCKIEST
Click to view ScubaDive's profile Founders ScubaDive 36 posts since
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2. Re: What's the trick to a good business slogan? Sep 21, 2007 1:28 PM
in response to: LUCKIEST
Those are all very good points Luckiest. Checking the Yellow Pages is a good idea because you can see in print what the competition is doing and saying. I think in this digital age we forget about the good old fashioned options. Thanks!
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Aug 14, 2007
3. Re: What's the trick to a good business slogan? Sep 21, 2007 3:28 PM
Brainstorming is the best thing in the world for coming up with what it creative. I always tell clients to start with their business' mission statement...which typically contains all of the elements of success for your particular venture. Then start adding buzz words and other "energy" or "action" words to it. You want your slogan to do several things: first you want it to be original and copyrightable; next you want it to have a rhythm that will be easy and fun to say; next you want to convey the right message so that when folks say it, they will know what it means and want to participate. Brainstorming will allow you to take all these components and analyze and then structure them. Use a whiteboard or large sheets of paper on a wall...don't confine yourself to a sheet of paper on your desk...you need to see it, stand back, look at it again and imagine yourself as your customer. Empathize with the persons who will be reading it. Remember, you're not writing this for YOU, you're writing it for the folks who will want to do business with you! Good luck!
Click to view ScubaDive's profile Founders ScubaDive 36 posts since
Jul 22, 2007
4. Re: What's the trick to a good business slogan? Sep 21, 2007 5:42 PM
in response to: Score133
Thanks Score133. Your approach is really helpful and your process is really clear and fun. This is an excellent starting point as well.
Click to view JavaJoe's profile Founders JavaJoe 19 posts since
Jul 28, 2007
5. Re: What's the trick to a good business slogan? Sep 25, 2007 3:43 PM
in response to: ScubaDive

I agree with Score133 - brainstorming is key!

  1. Write down anything that comes to mind.
  2. Keep paper/pencil handy with you at all times as you never know when you'll get inspired.
  3. Then go back and review the list for the names that really pop out.
  4. Take top names and vet them against others if you are unsure.
  5. Make sure that you take the necessary legal measures to ensure that you are planning to use a name that is trademarked by another company, etc.
Click to view Mozart's profile Founders Mozart 31 posts since
Jul 28, 2007
6. Re: What's the trick to a good business slogan? Sep 27, 2007 12:47 PM

I think you need to be focused - - identify your target marketing and then select a name that would be most appealing to them.
Click to view mpoweringu's profile Mogul mpoweringu 29 posts since
Oct 10, 2007
7. Re: What's the trick to a good business slogan? Oct 12, 2007 11:22 AM
ScubaDive -

There are a lot of good points mentioned here and many that follow the traditional methods that have been used for decades. I myself, however, tend to be a bit non-traditional and want to give you a few things to think about and a great book to read. Now, I'm not sponsored by them, so I'm not trying to sell it...but it is a GREAT book that motivates any entrepreneur and gives you great advice on what to do in situations.

You ask how to come up witha good business slogan. For years we've combined this or pulled this from our company's mission statement. When we do this, we start to duplicate phrases (which isn't a bad thing to enforce your core mission) and sometimes it forces us to create not-so-catchy, long slogans.

May I suggest what Guy Kawasaki suggests in his book (the one you should read) "The Art of the Start," that instead of a company slogan...think of your company motto.

What is a motto?

Using Wikipedia it is: a phrase or a short list of words meant formally to describe the general motivation or intention of an entity, social group, or organization.

So that answer one question you had. Make it short and sweet! Imagine trying to put a two sentence "slogan" under your logo on a business card? It would look weird wouldn't it?

What does your motto do? It describes in a way, what you do, or what I believe is your value. That is what is important to your potential customer.

Take Hewlett-Packard for example, is "invent" their slogan or motto? Well, it probably treated as both. But as a "traditional" slogan, how does that give you ANY clue what they do? Does it tell you that they make PCs, printers, networking components, etc.? Probably not. Does it clue you in that they are an organization focused on innovation and putting the next great innovative ideas into their products (whatever they may be) to make them continually better, YES!

So to help you out. Think, what is my value? (maybe you know Maui and sights in Maui that no other competitive firm does...so your knowledge of all things Maui.) What do I REALLY do? (you help people explore a "world" that they've probably never been to before.) What's my motto? (maybe something like "Opening Your Eyes to Maui")
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8. Re: What's the trick to a good business slogan? Oct 19, 2007 11:41 PM
I think the best way is to tie the slogan to your business name and model. For example: I am a real estate investor. My business name is Family First Realty, which I am actually in the process of changing to Family First Investors...since everyone thinks I am realtor when they hear the name. Anyhow, my slogan for my business is simply, "We Put Your Family First" see how it highlights our business name as well as what we do, which is find housing for families? Just tie it all together and I think you would come up with something fairly easy. Brainstorm it when you are driving or laying in bed. I find those times to be the most mentally productive time to think creatively. Good luck.
Click to view guru2008's profile Professional guru2008 15 posts since
Jan 1, 2008
9. Re: What's the trick to a good business slogan? Jan 6, 2008 10:31 PM
"MAD" Maui Adventure & Diving

"The Untold History of

"MAD"

Horse backriding
Diving
Snorkeling
Camping
Fishing
Back Packing

WE ARE THE AUTHORITY
Click to view Iwrite's profile Mogul Iwrite 777 posts since
Dec 29, 2007
10. Re: What's the trick to a good business slogan? Jan 7, 2008 9:31 AM
in response to: guru2008
The correct term is a "Tagline." It is a statement or saying that appears in conjunction with your name or logo. But sometimes, the tagline takes on a life of its on. Taglines can be changed as the business conditions change. Logos tend to be more permanent, but can be updated and changed also. Here are a couple of famous taglines that really worked:

Army - Be all you can be
Nike - Just do it
Coke - Coke is it
RadioShack - You've got questions, we've got answers

I think the brainstorm idea is the best suggestion. Normally, it takes a while. This is a creative process, you cannot force it. Have fun brainstorming, don't just sit there staring at a board or a sheet of paper. Let the conversation go where ever it wants, you'll be surprised with what comes up. One of my old teachers called it "organized chaos." To people not involved it may looks like nothing is happening or you are playing but the more relaxed you are the better the ideas will be. There are no rules to brianstorming but remember to encourage open thinking, let folks throw anything and everything out. You'll be surprised what sticks - "Where's the Beef?!"

Have fun!!
Click to view blubulb's profile Start-up blubulb 3 posts since
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11. Re: What's the trick to a good business slogan? Jan 8, 2008 4:41 PM
in response to: Iwrite

as has been said before:
simple
catchy
captures what your company does
captures the image/style of your company

also:
differentiates you from competitors. be what they are not

I thought this article had some interesting insights related to this: http://ries.typepad.com/ries_blog/2007/10/closing-day-in-.html
Click to view Iwrite's profile Mogul Iwrite 777 posts since
Dec 29, 2007
12. Re: What's the trick to a good business slogan? Jan 8, 2008 4:56 PM
in response to: blubulb
ScubaDive,

Is there a native word for journey, excursion? I am thinking sort of like the Australian concept "WalkAbout." It might be cool and interesting to go native with the name. Just a thought.
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13. Re: What's the trick to a good business slogan? Jan 8, 2008 5:04 PM
in response to: Iwrite
Great answers BUT I think we LOST ScubaDive. There has not been a post from him since Sept 21.
WHERE R U Scuba? LUCKIEST
Click to view Iwrite's profile Mogul Iwrite 777 posts since
Dec 29, 2007
14. Re: What's the trick to a good business slogan? Jan 8, 2008 6:27 PM
in response to: Iwrite
Oh well. I had to throw it out there or it would have bothered me forever! Too bad, I was just getting warmed up. :-)
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